Is my song well written ?

Letitia · Post by **Letitia** » Sat 25 May 2013 20:39

De rien!

sue and paul · Post by **sue and paul** » Sat 25 May 2013 21:12

..."I 'm not sure to understand why you're talking about "Les femmes savantes"..."

Oh, Letitia, I'm sorry. I wasn't having a go at you for wanting it to be correct. I was having a joke at my own expense because I get very precious about correct grammar, (as in 'Les Femmes Savantes") and could go on about it until the cows come home. I wrote and edited my comment twice before posting, but have obviously still missed the mark! Do forgive me.

I wish I could sing like you - well done!

Letitia · Post by **Letitia** » Sat 25 May 2013 21:24

Thanks. I have nothing to forgive since i didn't find you agressive at all.

I can be a bit "femme savante" sometimes so i just wanted to explain why^^

Sue · Post by **Sue** » Sun 26 May 2013 09:04

You remind me of Marianne Faithful who was singing well before you were born. I personally think you have the voice to sing much stronger rock songs as well as what you are doing now. But hey I dont know anything about music other than what I like.

Letitia · Post by **Letitia** » Sun 09 Jun 2013 17:51

Hi !

I found time to record some music on the lyrics. It's only a test for the beginning of the song, but it gives an idea about what the song will look like when finished. Hope you'll enjoy...

Voir le Fichier : I_See_Piano_Mix.mp3

(To Sue : ever heard the name of Marianne Faithful, but never heard her voice before you talked about her. It's difficult for me to see what reminds you of her when listening to me, but why not?)

Letitia · Post by **Letitia** » Wed 06 Aug 2014 18:18

Hello!

For those who were interested in my writing songs and singing them, here's the last song I wrote :
https://www.facebook.com/pages/DUMBO/66 ... 48?fref=nf

I hope you'll enjoy it and maybe like the page^^

Have a good day!

Létitia

martyn94 · Post by **martyn94** » Fri 08 Aug 2014 19:31

A very late comment. As has been said, very few English listeners would would know "apnoea": worse, it has three syllables -Ap-Nee-Ah, so the lyric as sung would not be understood even by those who know the word. "breathless" is less original, but gets most of the meaning, and fits the tune.

Letitia · Post by **Letitia** » Tue 12 Aug 2014 22:31

Thanks for the comment! I change "I'm in apnea" and add "I'm breathless"!

https://www.facebook.com/pages/DUMBO/66 ... e=bookmark

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