Is my song well written ?
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..."I 'm not sure to understand why you're talking about "Les femmes savantes"..."
Oh, Letitia, I'm sorry. I wasn't having a go at you for wanting it to be correct. I was having a joke at my own expense because I get very precious about correct grammar, (as in 'Les Femmes Savantes") and could go on about it until the cows come home. I wrote and edited my comment twice before posting, but have obviously still missed the mark! Do forgive me.
I wish I could sing like you - well done!
Oh, Letitia, I'm sorry. I wasn't having a go at you for wanting it to be correct. I was having a joke at my own expense because I get very precious about correct grammar, (as in 'Les Femmes Savantes") and could go on about it until the cows come home. I wrote and edited my comment twice before posting, but have obviously still missed the mark! Do forgive me.
I wish I could sing like you - well done!
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Hi !
I found time to record some music on the lyrics. It's only a test for the beginning of the song, but it gives an idea about what the song will look like when finished. Hope you'll enjoy...
Voir le Fichier : I_See_Piano_Mix.mp3
(To Sue : ever heard the name of Marianne Faithful, but never heard her voice before you talked about her. It's difficult for me to see what reminds you of her when listening to me, but why not?)
I found time to record some music on the lyrics. It's only a test for the beginning of the song, but it gives an idea about what the song will look like when finished. Hope you'll enjoy...
Voir le Fichier : I_See_Piano_Mix.mp3
(To Sue : ever heard the name of Marianne Faithful, but never heard her voice before you talked about her. It's difficult for me to see what reminds you of her when listening to me, but why not?)
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I come back!
Hello!
For those who were interested in my writing songs and singing them, here's the last song I wrote :
https://www.facebook.com/pages/DUMBO/66 ... 48?fref=nf
I hope you'll enjoy it and maybe like the page^^
Have a good day!
Létitia
For those who were interested in my writing songs and singing them, here's the last song I wrote :
https://www.facebook.com/pages/DUMBO/66 ... 48?fref=nf
I hope you'll enjoy it and maybe like the page^^
Have a good day!
Létitia
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Thanks for the comment! I change "I'm in apnea" and add "I'm breathless"!
https://www.facebook.com/pages/DUMBO/66 ... e=bookmark
https://www.facebook.com/pages/DUMBO/66 ... e=bookmark